Monday, May 3, 2021

Blogger #18, Vanessa Lei - Period 2 - 4/29/21 - Day A

 Odyssey Postcard Mini Project ------------------------------------------------------------------------


  • Instructions from class: Choose two locations from the list below and depict Odysseus’s adventure in the two locations. Each location should have it’s own postcard with a front and back. The front should include a related picture to the journey.

The back on the bottom right of the postcard should include the explanation of the picture. Include a creative address and a stamp also related to the journey. Most importantly include a 1-3 paragraph explanation of the journey, thoughts, and more in 4-5 sentences each. You can use websites such as https://www.canva.com/create/postcards/ for aid in making your postcard. These can be done on a google slide but be sure to have a front and back for both totalling up to 4 slides minimum. A good example would be this postcard (on the right) from Penelope to Telemachus. Instead on this project we will focus on Odysseus and his journey after the Trojan War. This postcard is missing a brief explanation of the front which we are required to include specifically at the bottom right of our cards.  

  

  1. Ismarus (city of the Cicones)

  2. Cythera (Land of the Lotus Eaters)

  3. The Cyclops Island (Polyphemus’ cave)

  4. Aeolus’ kingdom

  5. Land of the Laestrygonians

  6. Aeaea (Circe’s palace)

  7. The Underworld

  8. Island of the Sirens

  9. Scylla and Charybdis 

  10. Thrinacia Island (home to the sun god)



  • Questions: 

    • What POV should the postcards be written? 

The two postcards are to be written in first person point of view. 


  • Are we allowed to address the postcard to both Telemachus and Penelope? 

Yes, we are allowed to include both family members or separate it. 


  • Are we allowed to use cyber space for our cover and stamps? 

Yes, we are allowed to use cyber space for images be sure it is related to the topic. 


  • Does the address have to be real? 

No, we can be creative and have fun with making up the address. 


  • Are we allowed to decorate one by hand? 

Yes, feel free to decorate one by hand. 


  • Do we have to use Canva? 

No, it is recommended but use whatever works best for you. 


  • How many documents do we upload? 

We upload ONE document with 2 fronts and 2 backs.

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The Cyclops (Polyphemus) Vs Odysseus Virtual Debate 


ASYNCHRONOUS WORK 


Note! Polyphemus is another way to say cyclops. 


This assignment has 5 segments. First segment is to complete Odysseus vs. Polyphemus chart found in assignment RL SP: Cyclops vs Odysseus Virtual Debate document. Select a side of the Cyclops or Odysseus and watch Discussion Board Etiquette before defending their actions with a statement on Google Classroom discussion board. To earn full points on this assignment you must also respond/debate with one of your classmates posts. 


Refer to Writing-Forum-Posts-and-Replies-1.pdf for extra help.  


Tips offered by  Discussion Board Etiquette: 

  • Post your discussion early to let it develop

  • Refer to others post to build discussion 

  • Write clearly and concisely to get the meaning across

  • Read others posts help avoid repetitiveness

  • Explain your ideas and agreements 

  • Be civil and respectful of other debaters

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  Aim: How do Odysseus’s actions in “The Cyclops” support or refute his epic character? 


  • Do now: class discussion 

As previously discussed, the term, “Xenia” is the ancient Greek concept of hospitality, the generosity and courtesy shown to those who are far from home and/or associates of the person bestowing guest-friendship. The rituals of hospitality created and expressed a reciprocal relationship between guest hosts.


Based on your understanding of the term “Xenia” how important do you believe this attribute or behavior is to exemplify? Why? 


My classmates mentioned that it is important to exemplify both then and now. In The Odyssey Odysseus arrived at the island of Phaeacians. The people such as Nausicaa, Aretë and Alcinoüs took care of him with a feast and change of clothes. Even now if someone were to have a guest it’s common to treat them with generosity. I completely agree with my class on this point. Calypso was confident enough to place Odysseus on the island of “good-hearted” trusting they wouldn't eat him alive but instead take him in. In the modern day it is common manners to do the same but with guests we have invited over. 


  • Do now: class discussion

Reflect on the heroes you have encountered throughout your life, in various forms: literature, movies or TV. Identify any weaknesses the hero(es) may have, and explain how it impairs their ability. 


My classmates mentioned superman and his weakness was kryptonite. Exposing superman to kryptonite would take his powers and even kill him. Other classmates more generally mentioned the weakness of many heroes. Family and friends are a weakness to any hero as it is attached to their personal life. This means if a villain were to get their hands on the family and friends it would mean full control over the heroes emotions. Sometimes it might even be a personal problem. Things such as an identity crisis or a dilemma. Overconfidence can be a big weak point as well as it might lead to impulsive actions. Personally I think a weakness can also mean a disadvantage. Maybe the hero could have been robbed or is threatened. 

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Homeric simile


Epic similes in The Odyssey, also known as Homeric  similes, give Homer’s narrative depth and force.

  • Homeric similes, also known as Epic Similes, are elaborate  comparisons, consisting of many lines,  between two different objects using “like”, “as”, “so”, or “just so”.  It is a comparison made between something unfamiliar or strange to the audience and something that is more familiar to them.

  • We often use short similes in everyday speech, like the example, “She’s tough as nails.” A Homeric Simile, however, is used to redirect the reader’s attention in unexpected, humorous, gruesome or heroic ways.

Examples of homeric similes video: https://youtu.be/Vak_9ipMngY

Homeric Similes include: 

  • “I drove my weight on it from above and bored it home like a shipwright bores his beam with a shipwright’s drill that men below, whipping the strap back and forth, whirl and the drill keeps twisting, never stopping –So we seized our stake with it fiery tip and bored it round and round in the giant’s eye.”

  • “It’s crackling roots blazed and hissed – as a blacksmith plunges a glowing ax or adze in an ice-cold bath and the metal screeches steam and its temper hardens – that’s the iron’s strength – so the eye of Cyclops sizzled round that stake.”

  • “Her mind in torment, wheeling like some lion at bay, dreading the gangs of hunters closing their cunning ring around him for the finish.

Throughout The Odyssey Homer used Homeric Similes to make comparisons to objects with the audience. This provides a good visual and understanding of the epic. It can also be used to exaggerate the characters and text along with building the reader's understanding. This is important to the text because without a good visual readers can easily get lost in Odysseus’s long journey. Exaggeration of the characters along with texts is also important since an epic is a long narrative poem about the historical heroes and gods.

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 What is Foreshadowing?

Foreshadowing  is where future events in a story, or perhaps the outcome, are suggested by the author before they happen. They are usually considered to be ominous, warning signs, or signs of bad things to come.  Foreshadowing can take many forms and be accomplished in many ways, with varying degrees of subtlety. However, if the outcome is deliberately and explicitly revealed early in a story (such as by the use of a narrator or flashback structure), such information does not constitute foreshadowing. 


Foreshadowing Definition Video 

Summary of the Video/Foreshadowing: 

Foreshadowing is used to help the readers build an educated guess about the upcoming events. It can subtly help set the atmosphere or setting for the event. Along with also keeping the readers on their toes about the upcoming events in the story or can be used simply to inform the reader. Other popular writers such as William Shakespeare used foreshadowing most popular in his tragedy of Hamlet and Julius Caesar. Personally I find foreshadowing very helpful in writing to deliver pleasure and satisfaction. For example if a character was wronged in my story I can use foreshadowing to help the reader infer the consequences. This is then proven true to deliver the satisfaction. 

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What is Hubris?

  • Hubris is a Greek term meaning  excessive pride or over-confidence (think arrogance)

  • Can cause the character to disregard reality  or offend the gods, often leading to their downfall 

  • A character flaw often seen in the heroes of classical Greek tragedies

  • Committing hubris was very much looked down upon in Ancient Greece


What is Hubris?  

Summary of the Video/Hubris: Another word for Hubris would be high-fluctuating or variable self-esteem. This does not mean however high-self esteem. It can also accurately mean a combination of excessive pride and arrogance. Examples of hubris can be found in pieces such as John Milton’s Paradise Lost. Where Lucifer or in other names Satan tried to make other angels worship him.

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“The Cyclops” 11 Page Summary 


In The Cyclops Odysseus encounters what would be one of his biggest challenges on the journey home. Not because it was dangerous but instead the consequences of Odysseus’s choices during this chapter. Odysseus and his men find themselves on the shore of an island. An island full of giants that only fought for themselves. Odysseus and his men are then held captive after being caught stealing food. The group quickly realized they had to formulate a plan or they would die. The plan was to offer Polyphemus wine and hurt him at the weakest point. With a burning poker Odysseus and his men stabbed a poker right into the eye of Polyphemus. Polyphemus was unaware of Odysseus’s true name as he was known to be “nohbdy” until Odysseus bragged about his victory. This revealed his true name in which Polyphemus reached out to his father, Poseidon,  to never let Odysseus return home. The men left the island on the ships but Poseidon was angry at Odysseus causing trouble for Odysseus on the rest of the journey home to Ithaca. 



Today’s class was running a little short on the time provided after the reading, “The Cyclops”. We were unable to hold the group discussion planned but here are my answers to the discussion. 


GROUP DISCUSSION

  1. Based on your understanding of foreshadowing, review lines 153-156.  How is foreshadowing used, and what exactly is being foreshadowed?


Foreshadowing is used to help the reader infer what would happen next upon their arrival to the island would be terrible. Quoting, “for in my bones I knew some towering brute would be upon us soon.” The event of being trapped inside Polyphemus’s home and watching him eat people alive. 


  1. What heroic qualities does Odysseus display thus far?

(Heroic Qualities: Intelligence/Resourcefulness, Strength, Bravery and loyalty, Weakness)

  1. What does the fact that he doesn’t want to attack the Cyclops reveal about his character? 

The fact that Odysseus doesn’t want to attack the Cyclops revealed that his character did have a weakness. This discussion refers back to the do now discussion. Every hero has their weaknesses. Odysseus’s weakness happened to reside in his heart because he happened to feel indifferent towards them. Another reason Odysseus might have displayed heroic qualities by not attacking the Cyclops is they would’ve been trapped inside the home blocked by a boulder if the giant died. 

  1. Refer to line 232-243. How does Homer use figurative language to create imagery? (identify examples and explain their effect)

In lines 232-243 Homer used figurative language to create imagery and give the readers a visual. For example the quote, “caught two in his hands like squirming puppies to beat their brains out, spattering the floor.” We can imagine how helpless his crew was against the giants. It also allows us to create pity for the crew compared to squirming puppies. 

How should we judge the heroic qualities of Odysseus based on his actions with the cyclops? 

We can judge the heroic qualities of Odysseus based on his actions with the cyclops. He was able to think outside the box to save him and his crew mates but ended the plan foolishly. After puncturing the eye of Polyphemus he announced his real name and crew. This cursed him on the rest of the trip home. 

  1. Contrast Polyphemus’ values and the values of Odysseus (hospitality [xenia], respect for the gods, protections for his men).


  1. Can you identify any qualities/characteristics that both Odysseus and Polyphemus share? 

A characteristic or quality both Odysseus and Polyphemus has is stupidity. 

Polyphemus shows his foolishness in believing that Odysseus’s real name is nohbdy. While Odysseus is foolish for announcing his real name after poking Polyphemus leading to his following struggles home. 


  1. If Odysseus represents civilization, and polyphemus represents nature, what do you think Homer is saying about the relation of man to nature? 


If Odysseus represents civilization and Polyphemus represents nature I think Homer is saying nature isn’t going to change its way. The cyclops have been living this way on the island for centuries. Odysseus and his men are the civilization trying to change the way of nature. By injuring it they are allowed to live. Therefore, nature isn’t changing it’s way for civilization instead civilization is changing the way of nature. 


Can you see potential dangers (that are becoming increasingly evident,             especially in the modern era) in this position taken by Homer?

Some potential dangers would be extinction. We are constantly losing important things such as trees and animals that have inhabited our planet for centuries. Due to the civilization created global warming is an evident problem. Maybe in the story this could lead to the extinction of cyclops. As they showed a weakness and the civilization needed to kill them for their own benefit.  


  1. As previously discussed, the story is told through flashback (Odysseus is revealing the past events of his journey), therefore, how has Polyphemus’ curse impacted the course of Odysseus’ future.


This story is told through the flashback of how Odysseus was able to get home to his family. Before taking the final blow to Polyphemus Odysseus reveals his real identity. This is proved to be a problem as Polyphemus was the son of Poseidon, god of the sea. Lucky for Odysseus he needed the sea for transportation on his whole journey home. He was faced with six headed monsters, sirens, and even whirlpools.  


Reflection 


In today’s lesson I made multiple connections from the class discussion to the text we read in class. One of the first connections is with the term “Xenia”. Xenia means to show hospitality to guests. After reading the assigned summary of The Odyssey Books I-VIII, I was originally confused on how Calypso was able to trust the Phaeacians to take care of Odysseus. Upon this lesson I learned of this important aspect in not just Greek culture but in the modern day as well. It made me realize what we all do unintentionally. We also had a class discussion on the heros we have encountered. Each hero and villain has their own weaknesses. While reading “The Cyclops” I was able identify the weaknesses of the hero Odysseus. The weakness included foolishness and over-confidence. Another word for over-confidence that we also learned today in class is hubris. After spearing Polyphemus in the eye Odysseus announces, “Cyclops, if ever mortal man inquire how you were put to shame and blinded, tell him Odysseus, raider of cities, took your eye; Laetre’s son, whose home on Ithaca!”  We learned important literary skills such as homeric similes and foreshadowing used by Homer to write this epic. An example of an homeric simile right from today’s read would be “he clutched at my companions and caught two in his hands like squirming puppies to beat their brains out,”. This was able to build emotions of pity for the reader. An example of the literary device foreshadowing is also used directly in the text, “A wineskin full I brought along...for in my bones I knew some towering brute would be upon us soon.” Readers are given a change to comprehend what would happen in the text. Overall in this lesson I learned of the multiple literary devices such as homeric similes and foreshadowing. I also learned important vocabulary I can use to annotate my future readings such as xenia and hubris. This will improve my understanding towards classics since they are written in a father unfamiliar syntax. Following class for asynchronous work on the virtual debate I was able to educate myself on virtual debates. From avoiding repetitiveness to building a good argument without actually arguing. Overall today’s class helped me further my vocabulary and construct verbal debates. 


Blogger #10 Miki Chiu Period 7 4/28/21 Day C

3 RL SP: Odyssey: Homer’s Invocation

Aim: How does Homer's invocation establish tone for the beginning of the Odyssey?

After finishing the poem anthology project and learning about poems, we will be starting on the Odyssey. Ms. Peterson addresses that this is the starting point of where things are going to change and begin to get harder to prepare us for sophomore year. We usually do most of our work in class, but the Odyssey is structured differently. Ms. Peterson also reminds us of how teachers are going to give you a syllabus and not remind you of homework that is due anymore. Now it is our responsibility to check syllabus regularly. Today’s lessons include homework which is reading and taking notes. A majority of it is reading stuff asynchronously because it’s our responsibility as students to be prepared. 


Do Now: CLASS DISCUSSION

How do you become inspired? Where does it originate?


Some of my classmates' answers are as follows:

Sophia said inspiration comes from the people around you. 

Bernice said inspiration comes from personal experience. 

Joanne said inspiration comes from music, books, literature or art. 

I think inspiration comes from people you idolize or people around you. 

Then, Ms. Peterson points out that everyone draws inspiration from different places or people.

After discussing the do now, we have to make a new team name inspired by the Odyssey. My team's old name was The Spirits which was inspired by the Alchemist and has now changed to The Wind Walkers. 


We then moved on to talk about the nine muses and how they served as an inspiration for writers and artists and watched a YouTube video discussing how they were inspirational goddesses. Here is the link https://youtu.be/ORKCWfbrY8k. 


Next, we conversed about the invocation of the muse. What is an invocation? Look it up. When I used my device to look up the work “invoke”, the definition I got was “to cite or appeal to (someone or something) as an authority for an action or in support of an argument”. 


Group Discussion 

As a class, we read Homer’s Invocation, lines 1-17 and discuss the three following questions.

  1. What is your opinion of Odysseus so far after hearing Homer's invocation to the muses and learning about the Trojan War? Oscar says he’s being smart and courageous. 

  2. How does Homer maintain the audience’s interest in the story, knowing that the audience is aware of the outcome from the very beginning?   Homer maintained the audience's attention by using poetic language and metrical phrases.

  3. What does the invocation of the Muse in the opening lines clarify about Odysseus’ culpability (responsibility for a fault or wrong; blame) during his voyage home? Wilson Wang says he tries to save his men but the men didn’t come back bc of foolishness. His men only perished because they ate the cattle of the sun god. Joanne says it’s making reference to lord helios and the god of thunder and it's like a teaser in the invocation because it is also revealed that his men's foolishness led to their demise.

We did an anticipation guide at the end of the lesson to input our opinions on various quotes. At the end of the google form, we had to write a paragraph stating what we strongly opinionated against and I disagree with the leaders being responsible for the people they supervise, because although that should be true, most people will disobey or rebel against the rules and cause chaos.


4 RL SP: Odyssey: Sailing from Troy & Lotus Eaters


Aim: How does “Sailing From Troy” and “The Lotus Eaters” (Book IX) establish Odysseus’ role as a leader?


This cycle, we had to fit two lessons into one cycle to speed up the pace. 


Do Now: Consider the fact that Odysseus has been trying to return to

his home in Ithaca for 10 years. Imagine being away from your home for that long. 

1) What would you miss the most and why? 

Well, I would miss my family the most because they’ve been around me since I was born and I love them.

2) Why do we have sayings like the ones below? 

We have sayings like that because although there can always be a place similar to home, there's no place that can replace it.

                          

Some of my classmates' answers are as follows:

Lixiang said he will miss his family the most and that most people will miss family the most because you can never replace the original family and there’s only one family you can have and that’s at home. 

Tempestt will miss his family but besides that he would miss being able to shower and having a bed. He said that there’s a saying that “home is where the heart is” and how family is the home and you don’t really need a house to call it home. 

Natalie will miss her bed the most. 

Alma would miss her family and miss having the feeling that she’s surrounded by ppl she loves. 


Characterization 

The method by which an author creates the personality and appearance of their character.

Direct Characterization: The author makes direct statements about the character (can be revealed through a narrator or through another character in the story). The author TELLS the reader what they want them to know.

Indirect Characterization: indirectly stated from character's actions, choices they make, dialogue/relationships with others, thoughts, feelings. The author SHOWS the reader what they want them to know.


We can use the STEAL method for Indirect Characterization. 

■ Speech

■ Thoughts

■ Effect on others toward the

character.

■ Actions

■ Looks

For a more specific view on STEAL, here is the following:

■ SPEECH - What does the character say?

How does the character speak?

■ THOUGHTS - What is revealed through the character’s private thoughts and

feelings?

■ EFFECTS - What is revealed through the character’s

effect on other people?

How do other characters feel or behave in reaction to the character?

■ ACTIONS - What does the character do?

How does the character behave?

■ LOOKS - What does the character look like? How does the character dress?


Then, we watch a YouTube video explaining characterization using the Disney movie, Frozen. Here is the link https://youtu.be/-ZnD0AGqQ7I. 


We continue to read “Sailing from Troy” lines 18-69 and answer the question:


Keep in mind that the Odyssey is the account of Odysseus' ten year journey back home to Ithaca. He misses his family and home; therefore, we will often find connections to this throughout the poem.

Identify lines in which Odysseus talks about his home in Ithaca.

➢ How does he feel about it? (Specific lines/evidence that describe these feelings)


However, we did not have enough time to finish answering the question and finish the lesson. Ms. Peterson also informs us that unlike the English language, where the letter e is not pronounced at the end of a word, it should be pronounced in the Greek language.


We were supposed to read “Lotus Eaters” lines 70-105 and answer the following questions :

  1. What kind of world do you think the Lotus Eaters live in? ➢ Describe the type of lifestyle it is?

    1. What do you think Homer is implying about this lifestyle/world?

  2. How does The Odyssey characterize the land of the Lotus-eaters as a veritable

    1. (real or genuine) paradise? And, why, then, is this land seen by Odysseus and others as negative, and something from which to escape? What do you think is wrong with such a place, if anything?

  3. Consider the kind of leader Odysseus appears to be in "Sailing from Troy."

➢ How do his leadership abilities compare to how he is in "The Lotus Eaters?" 

➢ Has your opinion of him changed? Why/Why not?

➢ Why do you think these events are important to understanding Odysseus' character?

  1. In your notes, create a group list of the key events in "The Lotus Eaters."


Reflection

This cycle I learned more about the Odyssey and Greek mythology. My knowledge of more terms has expanded as well as knowing more about where poets get inspiration from and how people get inspired. I read more about the Odyssey by reading Homer’s Invocation and etc. I also learned more about characterization which is very important in literature. I renewed my knowledge of the STEAL method as well as characterization itself. I learned all of this to prepare myself for sophomore year, and just to have more knowledge of Greek mythology and literature techniques. I will use what I have learned in the future when I’m in my senior year of high school or when I’m in my first year of college. This will help me understand more passages and annotate better.


Sunday, May 2, 2021

Blogger #14 - Joy Li - Period 9 - 4/28/21 - Day C

 PART I

Aim: How does Homer’s invocation establish tone for the beginning of the Odyssey? 


Do Now: Class Discussion 

How do you become inspired? Where does it originate?

For these questions, I learned that my classmates get inspiration from pictures or art, video games, random thoughts that people suddenly think of in showers or while trying to sleep and in dreams. I get inspiration from random thoughts and ideas that I think of during the day and in my dreams.

TEAM NAME CHANGE

Our team discussed many different titles, such as “The Suitors,” “Gods and Goddesses,” “The Five Muses,” and “The Golden Apples.” In the end we have a unanimous vote for “The Suitors.”

Team 1 chose “Prophecy and Fate” which is pretty creative because of how we were discussing the difference between these two in the previous lesson. Team 3 chose “Odysseus” who’s the main character of the odyssey. Team 4’s name is “Polyphemus,” the unfortunate cyclop who Odysseus encountered on his travels and rid his eye.  Team 5 is “Homer’s Home,” inspired by the author of the Odyssey, Homer. Last but not least, Team 6 has chosen the name “Boat” because Odysseus traveled on a boat in his journey away from home for more than 10 years.


The Nine Muses

The nine muses are Clio, Euterpe, Thalia, Melpomeni, Terpsichore, Erato, Polymnia, Ourania and Calliope. They are the beautiful daughters of Zeus and the Titan Mnemosyne. Clio is the muse of history and Euterpe is the muse of musical instruments. Thalia is in charge of comedy while Melpomene is in charge of tragedy. Terpsichore invented dance and the harp. Erato is the protector of love and love poems. Polymnia invented geometry and grammar and Ourania invented astronomy. Lastly, there’s Calliope who imposes justice and serenity, protects heroic poems and rhetoric art. She also was Homer’s inspiration for writing the Iliad and the Odyssey.

What exactly is an invocation?

Invocation: calling upon the divine to help you


Class Discussion

  1. What is your opinion of Odysseus so far after hearing Homer's invocation to the muses and learning about the Trojan War?

         Our opinions of Odysseus after hearing Homer’s invocation to the muses and learning about the Trojan War is that Odysseus is clever and smart, but not very responsible after his men he was supposed to take home each died from their own foolishness.


  1. How does Homer maintain the audience’s interest in the story, knowing that the audience is aware of the outcome from the very beginning?

       Homer maintains the audience’s interest in the story by talking about the            details in between Odysseus’ journey and the challenges and different types of things that he encounters on his way home.


  1. What does the invocation of the Muse in the opening lines clarify about Odysseus’ culpability (responsibility for a fault or wrong; blame) during his voyage home?

        The invocation of the Muse in the opening lines clarify that  Odysseus didn’t take part in all the things his men did during the voyage, such as killing the sun god’s cows. Most actions weren’t his fault yet he was punished because he didn’t stop them and neither did he bring the men home in the end.


PART II

Aim: How does “Sailing From Troy” and “The Lotus Eaters” (Book IX) establish Odysseus’ role as a leader?


Do Now: Team List

Consider the fact that Odysseus has been trying to return to

his home in Ithaca for 10 years. Imagine being away from your home for that long.

1) What would you miss the most and why?

2) Why do we have sayings like the ones below?

My classmates had many things in common. Most of them would miss their home, comfy bed and their families. Some would miss their pets and others would miss the comfort of the homemade food their parents made and the weather. For example, if you’ve lived in Canada for most your life and suddenly moved down to Florida, it’ll take a while to get used to the blazing sun in Florida after leaving behind the cold and the snow in Canada.


Characterization

The method by which an author creates the personality and appearance of their character. There are two types of characterization: 


Direct Characterization: The author makes direct statements about the character (can be revealed through a narrator or through another character in the story). The author TELLS the reader what they want them to know.


Indirect Characterization: indirectly stated from character's actions, choices they make, dialogue/relationships with others, thoughts, feelings. The author SHOWS the reader what they want them to know. (S.T.E.A.L. Method)

 

STEAL

SPEECH- What does the character say?  How does the character speak?

THOUGHTS- What is revealed through the character’s private thoughts and feelings?

EFFECTS- What  is revealed through the character’s effect on other people? How do other characters feel or behave in reaction to the character?

ACTIONS- What does the character do? How does the character behave?

LOOKS- What does the character look like? How does the character dress?


Lotus Eaters

The Lotus Eaters were a part of the Odyssey. These Lotus Eaters gave the men in Odysseus’ ship a fruit that looks like the lotus flower. These flowers immediately took effect upon the first bite and caused the men to forget their yearning to go home and stay on the island, feeling free and being lazy. Lotus is a symbol of forgetfulness that makes people forget their past and their future. This flower-shaped fruit was what caused Odysseus to drag his men back to the ship while they wanted to stay on the island.



Blogger #13 - James Li - Period 9 - 4/28/21 - Day C

 Aim: How does Homer’s invocation establish tone for the beginning of the Odyssey?


Before the lesson, Ms. Peterson went over the updated syllabus. She told us about the due dates, lessons, and formatting of the syllabus. 


After that, we had a team name change. My team decided to change to a simple and short name - boat.


Then, we started our lesson with a class discussion on the question, “How do you become inspired? Where does it originate?” Christopher started the discussion by answering that he got inspiration from playing video games and reading Wikipedia articles. Randy stated that he drew inspiration from other people’s works. Kelly also thinks that she draws inspiration from works of other people, especially on Pinterest. I said that random thoughts at any time and shower thoughts give me the ideas and inspiration to do something. Ms. Peterson agreed and told us how her colleagues would rush to have their notepads ready for whenever they needed to quickly jot down the thoughts that come into their head.


We learned about the Muses after our class discussion.

The Nine Muses

  • Inspiration for Poets and Artists

  • Nine goddess of literature, art, and science

  • Clio (history)

  • Thalia (comedy)

  • Erato (love poetry)

  • Euterpe (lyric poetry/song/flutes)

  • Polyhymnia (sacred poetry)

  • Calliope (epic poetry)

  • Terpsichore (dance)

  • Urania (astronomy)

  • Melpomene (tragedy)

  • Homer pays homage to these goddesses in invocation to provide a purpose to the story and tie in Ancient Greek traditions


Invocation

  • Calling on a deity or spirit for witness or inspiration

  • Homer calls out to the goddesses for inspiration to tell his tale


We then read Homer’s invocation:



After reading this passage, we had a discussion about some questions.


1. What is your opinion of Odysseus so far after hearing Homer's invocation to the muses and learning about the Trojan War?


I think Odysseus is a determined man to try to make his way home with his crew mates. He seemed confident that, through difficulties and obstacles, he could save and send them home safely after the fall of Troy. Randy said that he respected the traditions of honoring the Muses and also plundered Troy in the war.

 

2. How does Homer maintain the audience’s interest in the story, knowing that the audience is aware of the outcome from the very beginning?


He maintains the audience’s interest with the epic stories, monsters, and events that happen during the tale. Justin also responds that Homer tells of the events, incidents, and difficulties in between to keep the audience interested.


3. What does the invocation of the Muse in the opening lines clarify about Odysseus’ culpability (responsibility for a fault or wrong; blame) during his voyage home?


I think the invocation clarifies that Odysseus was unsuccessful in bringing his crew home but it was mostly his men to blame. Randy says that Odysseus did horrible things like have his men eat the cows of Helios and unsuccessfully bring his crew back home.


We then did the anticipation form. It was a form with different proverbs and quotes that we had to choose if we agreed or disagreed with. At the end, we had to choose one and explain why we chose our response.


After filling out the form, we moved on the next lesson of the day.


Aim: How does “Sailing From Troy” and “The Lotus Eaters” (Book IX) establish Odysseus’s role as a leader?


Do Now:

Consider the fact that Odysseus has been trying to return to

his home in Ithaca for 10 years. Imagine being away from your home for that long.


We had a class discussion for our do-now. Kelly and Randy said that they would miss her family and memories at home. Kevin stated that he would miss his bed. Ayah responded with her family and pets. Francisco added that he would miss the comfort and feeling of being home and knowing where it was. Finally, Ms. Peterson told us that she would miss her family’s homemade meals the most.


Characterization

  • Method of creating the personality and image of a character

  • Direct Characterization 

    • Author makes direct statements; tells us about the character

  • Indirect Characterization

    • Author implies about character; shows the reader

  • STEAL Method

    • Speech, Thoughts, Effect on others, Actions, Looks


After, we read the passages “Sailing From Troy” and “The Lotus Eaters”.

At the end of the class, Ms. Peterson told us to go over the questions on the slides ourselves.


Summary of Sailing From Troy

Odysseus talks about his tale from Troy. He longs for his home, Ithaca, which he describes as the most dear and memorable as he says “I shall not see on earth a place more dear.” From Troy, he was brought to the Cicones where his men went to resupply and relax. They plundered the place and overstayed while Odysseus tells them to hurry and leave. They refuse and the fugitives run to call the main army. The army arrives to fight Odysseus’s crew, resulting in many deaths. They finally flee and cry as they sail away.


Summary of The Lotus Eaters

While sailing across the sea, they face an endless storm with blazing winds. The crew tries to survive. After nine days, they reach the island of the Lotus Eaters. These people have been intoxicated by the lotus, which makes you forget the memories and feeling of home after eating it. Odysseus is able to prevent his men from eating it and drag them back to the ship, where they sail away. The lotus eaters lived a life in “paradise” as they no longer longed for home and are happy to stay on the island forever. Homer implies the land as a trick and negative because the people are being forced to stay. They also try to have the crew eat the lotuses, an attempt to make them join. This place numbs their mind and never allows them to escape, which is a sign of defeat to those who have succumbed to the lotus fruit. Odysseus is shown as a leader because it is him who drives his men away from the lotuses. He himself has to take responsibility for their clumsiness to make sure they all get home alive.

Reflection:

Today, I learned about three passages of Homer’s Odyssey. These passages are Homer’s Invocation, Sailing From Troy, and The Lotus Eaters. After this lesson, I had a better comprehension of Homer’s writing and methods. His use of indirect characterization successfully molded Odysseus’s personality and character through his actions. For example, his strength and confidence to bring him and his crew home showed his determination. During class, we read these parts of his tale and understood the purpose and meanings of them. In Homer’s Invocation, he honored the Muses for help and inspiration in telling his tale of Odysseus. With this passage, he incorporates Greek traditions of invoking the Muses. In Sailing From Troy and The Lotus Eaters, Homer builds up Odysseus’s character through his sayings of his journeys to Alcinous and his determination to seek shelter and save his crew from the tempting Lotus Eaters. I learned about these passages because they show examples of Ancient Greek literature building character and tone. Experiencing Homer’s writing sense and how he created Odysseus’s personality is essential to teaching me about character development. Reading these passages required me to think and understand the purpose of them. For instance, The Lotus Eaters was important to indirectly describe Odysseus as a leader in his crew, straying them away from the hungry Lotus Eaters. With these passages and these two lessons in mind, I think I can use these methods in my own writing to fully grasp the idea of indirect characterization. Learning these examples of building tone and character allow me to catch it in other books that I may read. Being able to understand and grapple Homer’s writing and texts also can allow me to read other translated versions of epics, such as the Iliad.